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thezombiemessia
13-04-08, 17:26
Ext. 1. It is a stormy afternoon. The camera pans around a messy back garden of a house, and we get a shot of a badly damaged zombie stood in the pouring rain, it is missing an arm and has tattered clothing covering parts of its body.

Narrator (v.o):
No food. No clothing.


Ext. 2. A shot of a back alley, dirt and, grime everywhere. A half decomposed body of a zombie is lying on the ground, arms flailing, the occasional moan escaping its mouth.

Narrator (v.o):
Left to rot. Without a home.


Ext. 3. A shot of 10 zombies being kept in separate cages. A crowd of men and women watch as one is released and stumbles around in chains, trying to catch a man dressed in a clown costume. The clown beats the zombie down to the ground and kills it. The crowd goes wild.

Narrator (v.o):
Beaten. Abused. MURDERED.


Ext. 4. We are back in the messy back garden. A man in a NSPCZ uniform walks up to the zombie and starts taking his clothes off. The man places all of his clothes on the zombie. The naked man stands in front of the zombie, with "Eat me" painted on his chest. The zombie lunges for him.

Narrator (v.o):
All around the world we have volunteers working to protect these poor creatures.


Ext. 5. We are once again back in the back alley. We see a NSPCZ truck pull up, two men step out with shovels and start placing the rotting zombie onto the truck.

Int. 6. We watch as a NSPCZ doctor stitches rotten zombies back together. And they are then placed in large open areas that are fenced off from the public.

Narrator (v.o):
Just œ2 a month can help support our foundation. With your help we can feed and clothe our fallen friends.


Ext. 7. We are back at the zombie circus. Several dozen men and women charge into the circus holding signs with "Zombies are people to" written on them. They release the zombies in the cages, and the scene changes to that of devastation. The zombies attack everyone.

Narrator (v.o):
Your œ2 can help us find and train our employees.


8. The screen fades to black, the NSPCZ logo appears, with "National Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Zombies" written just below this.

Narrator (v.o):
Don t let these poor creatures fade out of our lives.


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I wrote this script about a year ago for one of my assignments. Was wondering what people thought?

I think i may have posted it on the old forum as well, but there are new members now...

dante213
18-04-08, 19:18
I dont get it, was this just you tooling around or are we supposed to respond in some way?

Nocturnal Stillness
18-04-08, 19:52
I think it is an interested concept and I wondered if you ever got further than the script?

thezombiemessia
19-04-08, 16:25
I dont get it, was this just you tooling around or are we supposed to respond in some way?



I guess you didnt read the full post?

I mention that comments are welcome. As with any topic on any forum to be perfectly honest.


But anywas...what did you think??


Noc:

Hey Matt, long time no talky. Myself and a few friends are about to start planning an online Zombie TV series :P So yeah, were getting somewhere with it :D

Nocturnal Stillness
19-04-08, 18:12
Cool youll have to keep me informed.

The Spirit
19-04-08, 18:18
I dont get it, was this just you tooling around or are we supposed to respond in some way?


Thats right, well I read his full post. What im wondering is what did he actually get in his assignment ;)

thezombiemessia
20-04-08, 10:35
I got a Distinction for this particular assignment :D

There are 4 grades for those that are un-aware:

Fail - No marks or not enough marks to grant any sort of award

Pass - The lowest grade. Essentially a C grade in A-level.

Merit - A B grade in A-level

Distinction - An A grade in A-level. Pretty much the best of the best.


I was one of the few in my class that got a Distinction in this particular assignment. Though my tutor did comment that she wished i had written something more serious.

dante213
20-04-08, 11:56
I guess you didnt read the full post?

I mention that comments are welcome. As with any topic on any forum to be perfectly honest.


But anywas...what did you think??


I see, I think i assumed the I wrote this script about a year ago for one of my assignments. Was wondering what people thought?

I think i may have posted it on the old forum as well, but there are new members now... was a signature because it was beneath a white line :$ now that i know what it is, very clever.:)